Amazing Writing

One of the activities that we complete during our reading rotations is a 100 Word Count Story.  It is really difficult to get exactly 100 words and still have stories that make sense.  Here are three of the stories we have written for the prompts.

The first prompt we had was the phrase

“....it was completely out of tune.”

I was in a shop I don’t know what I was even doing. I just woke up in the middle of a busy shop.
It was so busy I could not move to good.  It looked like it was a game shop. There was music
playing but suddenly it was completely out of tune. It started to go all fuzzy and cold. I thought
there was a blizzard outside or even in side it was that cold. People were confused when I got
so cold. It started to get warmer and we looked outside and the blizzard started going away.

By Jacob

This was it. My sister has finally got her chance to show everyone exactly what she can do. She was
prepared and ready to sing. She put on her sparkly sequined beautiful purple dress and  make up. She
looked so amazing and I believed she could do it. She marched on to the stage. I could see her
confidence and fear. She started to sing and I realised something was wrong. Everyone booed and
I could tell she did not notice what she was doing wrong. When the song ended I told her her song was
completely out of tune.

By Talisa

The second prompt we had was this picture

The sun blazed on my skin while I Iaid in my pool then Jack’s dad said, “Come, we need to go right
now!” We went to a camp.  It was called Camp Sunnyside then suddenly Jack's dad Jeff gave him a knife
and said, “Protect yourself, ok kid?” Suddenly the ground moved. I was unsteady on my feet  then lots
of army men came and shouted “ GET IN THE BUS OK LITTLE KIDS NO PARENTS ALLOWED!”
Then all the kids went in and left to a place far away an army base then Jack screamed “WHERE'S MR
SNUGGLES MY TEDDY BEAR?”.

By Jaedun