Room 7,2019

Room 7,2019

Sunday, 12 May 2019

100 Word Count Writing

This week for 100 word count writing we were given five words to include in a piece of writing.

The 5 words were

SALT   BROWN MELTED   GIRAFFE GREASY


Here are Venice and Talisa's pieces of writing


I was watching a national baking competition. It included pies, cakes, cupcakes and more deserts
but the most important and the most greatest desert of the whole wide city was the chocolate
brown giraffe. Many people had tried the recipe but nobody ever succeeded. I started baking it
and after a few hours I finished! It was a bit greasy but it tasted good. I put a bit of salt in it and
left it alone to get more ingredients. I came back, but it was too late it had already melted. Then
I knew my crazy friend ate it.
I was going to the zoo with my family for the holidays . It was a bright sunny day and we were in a good mood. As we entered we saw the amazing animals. While we were there I saw a giraffe. They had brown spots and long necks. It started to get late so we went home and purchased drinks with ice in it and the ice melted in to water. We ate dinner and talked about what we saw I could taste the salt in the dinner. We were going to sleep and I washed my tired, greasy hands.    

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